Please feedback my songs
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Please feedback my songs
http://www.myspace.com/deathmash
Im 15, and have been producing about 5-6 months now, i produce jungle/breakcore.
tell me what you think and how i can improve
cheers
Im 15, and have been producing about 5-6 months now, i produce jungle/breakcore.
tell me what you think and how i can improve
cheers
- DaLancinator
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- Location: Bordeaux, FRANCE
With which program u make your trax ?
I like your dnb/jungle rythm and the fx you use, but i think your trax are so repetitive.. But it's a good starting!
You got da thing, so keep workin' and u'll make some really nice stuff
I like your dnb/jungle rythm and the fx you use, but i think your trax are so repetitive.. But it's a good starting!
You got da thing, so keep workin' and u'll make some really nice stuff
- JohnMerrik
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I agree, good stuff, but very repetitve, I like the percussion alot, but i think you need more synths, and more creative melodies/rythums. Feel free to add some of your tracks to the site, so you can get rated, commented, etc here
and here I was thinking the only thing in western australia was dirt, sand, and lonliness
and here I was thinking the only thing in western australia was dirt, sand, and lonliness
I don't need a fucking signature... WolfMerrik.com
- omihoshbin
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- Location: gent , belgium
do love your jungle and your young man thats only an advantage ,still don't know how to sequence such jungle beats though ,
- Tryptomatik
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- Location: Colchester, Essex, UK
your tracks are cool man
im only 15 too and i make dark jungle/breakcore aswel
check me out if you would
www.myspace.com/tryptomatik
im only 15 too and i make dark jungle/breakcore aswel
check me out if you would
www.myspace.com/tryptomatik
- Dj Doreetoh
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gonna listen2lem soon, but its cool 2have 2 15yr olds here - im 16 i make mainstream gabber and speedcore/sillycore, and sometimes make numerous forms of noize music (pure,noizecore,experiomental etc)
ill add youse also!
ill add youse also!
cheers for the feedback people ... go back on there ive updated all the tracks in ableton which ive just started using, ive added loads more to The Devil & BOOM, effects etc
anyways just go back on there and check em out again
anyways just go back on there and check em out again
Last edited by deathmash on Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:37 am, edited 1 time in total.
Tryptomatik wrote:your tracks are cool man
im only 15 too and i make dark jungle/breakcore aswel
check me out if you would
www.myspace.com/tryptomatik
sup nice tunes you got there ... i see your on a label ????
im looking got get onto a label sometime in the future you reckon you could sort us out
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