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Please feedback my songs

Postby deathmash » Fri Jun 22, 2007 12:15 pm

http://www.myspace.com/deathmash

Im 15, and have been producing about 5-6 months now, i produce jungle/breakcore.

tell me what you think and how i can improve

cheers

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Postby DaLancinator » Fri Jun 22, 2007 2:10 pm

With which program u make your trax ?

I like your dnb/jungle rythm and the fx you use, but i think your trax are so repetitive.. But it's a good starting!

You got da thing, so keep workin' and u'll make some really nice stuff ;)

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Postby JohnMerrik » Fri Jun 22, 2007 2:33 pm

I agree, good stuff, but very repetitve, I like the percussion alot, but i think you need more synths, and more creative melodies/rythums. Feel free to add some of your tracks to the site, so you can get rated, commented, etc here ;)

and here I was thinking the only thing in western australia was dirt, sand, and lonliness ;)
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Postby Thallium » Sat Jun 23, 2007 5:22 am

What the hell are you doing living in WA?
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Postby deathmash » Sat Jun 23, 2007 6:15 am

haha i ask myself that every day, its shite here i prefered england, and yea ill upload some tracks now :)

I use fruity loops

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Postby omihoshbin » Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:08 pm

do love your jungle and your young man thats only an advantage ,still don't know how to sequence such jungle beats though :P ,

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Postby Tryptomatik » Mon Jul 02, 2007 2:55 pm

your tracks are cool man :)

im only 15 too and i make dark jungle/breakcore aswel

check me out if you would :)

www.myspace.com/tryptomatik

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Postby PEPCORE » Tue Jul 03, 2007 10:48 am

Some nice shit you got there. 8)

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Postby Dj Doreetoh » Sun Jul 08, 2007 11:34 am

gonna listen2lem soon, but its cool 2have 2 15yr olds here - im 16 i make mainstream gabber and speedcore/sillycore, and sometimes make numerous forms of noize music (pure,noizecore,experiomental etc)

ill add youse also!

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Postby deathmash » Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:31 am

cheers for the feedback people ... go back on there ive updated all the tracks in ableton which ive just started using, ive added loads more to The Devil & BOOM, effects etc

anyways just go back on there and check em out again :)
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Postby deathmash » Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:35 am

Tryptomatik wrote:your tracks are cool man :)

im only 15 too and i make dark jungle/breakcore aswel

check me out if you would :)

www.myspace.com/tryptomatik




sup nice tunes you got there ... i see your on a label ????

im looking got get onto a label sometime in the future you reckon you could sort us out :D :D

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Postby deathmash » Tue Jul 10, 2007 5:53 am

omihoshbin wrote:do love your jungle and your young man thats only an advantage ,still don't know how to sequence such jungle beats though :P ,



do you mean i dont or you dont know how to sequence jungle beats? :?

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