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- the shallow stairs
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please listen
okay, so this is the first 10 measures or so of the song that we are making (Napcat & The Shallow Stairs) pleas repsond, with suggestions, and be honest...
ps: i said honest not harsh, so please no "this sucks you cunt bag", but "i did not enjoy this; work on x, y, and z will be good"
ps: i said honest not harsh, so please no "this sucks you cunt bag", but "i did not enjoy this; work on x, y, and z will be good"
- HORSE FORCE
- The Horse Lord!
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damn son. sounds good. the pauses are weird tho. if you want the effect of a pause, sustain a note or something. i would also try to give the listener something to hold onto for a bit, but then take it away. this keeps the music interesting.
- the shallow stairs
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yea i've been working on that, what i did is i put a sick muted bass sound in some of the pauses, sort of making it suspenseful, then go all out with the hardcore shit
ty for responding!
ty for responding!
- the shallow stairs
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well, looks like this topic is not overflowing with responses, however, i tried to upload a track but, it will not work, and for the life of me i can't figure out why, so if you want to hear anything i have send me a private message or e-mail (iheartbreakcore@mail.com)
Listening now mate! Interesting, weird and it's got a nice combination of sounds! I actually quite liked the pauses, a kind of noisy broken drum 'n' bass thing going on to start with, silence, then back to banging noise again! Good effort!
BUT. . . Also agree with Horse Force! Think a lot of the listeners would like to hear some sustained note (or droning noise) in between the banging shit!
BUT. . . Also agree with Horse Force! Think a lot of the listeners would like to hear some sustained note (or droning noise) in between the banging shit!
- the shallow stairs
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aight..aight..thanks for the input
http://www.myspace.com/rejectionprojectmusic
http://www.reverbnation.com/rejectionproject
art holiday and the shallow stairs are rejection project!
http://www.reverbnation.com/rejectionproject
art holiday and the shallow stairs are rejection project!
- the shallow stairs
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yea i also put it on my myspace (see below)
http://www.myspace.com/rejectionprojectmusic
http://www.reverbnation.com/rejectionproject
art holiday and the shallow stairs are rejection project!
http://www.reverbnation.com/rejectionproject
art holiday and the shallow stairs are rejection project!
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