New dubstep by Ohyra on soundcloud.
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New dubstep by Ohyra on soundcloud.
So yeah i made a new track and i would love some feedback! If you dont feel like giving tips, just listen and tell me if it sucked, or tell me how great you thought it was!
The track is called gungrave.
http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/ohyra-gungrave
The track is called gungrave.
http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/ohyra-gungrave
- Feutus Lapdance
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Its a good Dubstep Track....but it mis the Rawnes of Reso, Barnoise and Roksonix......maby it needs some vocals and a difrent machinegun sound (this one sounds a bit C&C )Like a AK47 or a M60.
- SweetPeaPod
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i thought it was a good track.. i just don't like the wobbles.... not saying you did it bad, i just like the dub that doesn't have that. .. sorry, i know you like that sound. You just hear it all over the place.. You should try to replicate that sound movement with different sources... like the sound of water... or trains... or take a fucking piece of aluminum or sheet metal, and record yourself shaking that shit!!!! play it like an instrument
Bring some new form to this style !!!! Hype it up without going to a "go-to" sound
you're prob all, "well, fuck you dude".... but i mean well... again, i thought you did a good job
Bring some new form to this style !!!! Hype it up without going to a "go-to" sound
you're prob all, "well, fuck you dude".... but i mean well... again, i thought you did a good job
@ fetus & pep: Yeah i agree, it could have been a bit rawer but im kinda bad at it. When i try to make my shit more raw, it usually ends up clipping really fucking horrible
@ sweetpeapod: Hahha check out some of my other tracks then, like romero project, more deep and stuff! Actually one of the wobbles is a sample of a glass hitting floor!
Hahha no im not all "well fuck you dude"! I be loving all of your feedback! Thanks alot to everyone! *gay unicorns dancing in the rainbows and everyone is happy"
@ sweetpeapod: Hahha check out some of my other tracks then, like romero project, more deep and stuff! Actually one of the wobbles is a sample of a glass hitting floor!
Hahha no im not all "well fuck you dude"! I be loving all of your feedback! Thanks alot to everyone! *gay unicorns dancing in the rainbows and everyone is happy"
- Feutus Lapdance
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No....I dont mean It should be more dirty. But we are Breakcore....And if Reso and Barnoise have somthing in comon Its the fact that, Just like in Breakcore, there is 4 things going on at the same time, 4 things in harmony. So.....make it les minmal and make it more complex.....make it more.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y29wtWiMjHs
Note the vocals, note the Hardcore and note how 4 things work togeter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaDHJMmJZRc
The amen, the 8bit, Drums, vocals, Note how al those things work togeter......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30i3dq4j ... re=related
Ok dont wory. Joure sound is realy good.....its a good track......But, jou have the abilety to be more....to surpas the normal.....to bring sound to overdrive. Not to be boring like this dude.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37yT3BrA ... re=related
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y29wtWiMjHs
Note the vocals, note the Hardcore and note how 4 things work togeter
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaDHJMmJZRc
The amen, the 8bit, Drums, vocals, Note how al those things work togeter......
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30i3dq4j ... re=related
Ok dont wory. Joure sound is realy good.....its a good track......But, jou have the abilety to be more....to surpas the normal.....to bring sound to overdrive. Not to be boring like this dude.....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37yT3BrA ... re=related
- djtheblade
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Clipping is great, I clip all the time
Just feed your wobble through FL Blood overdrive. And stick some metallic clangs in there. Otherwise structurally the tune is good and the production sounds very clean
Just feed your wobble through FL Blood overdrive. And stick some metallic clangs in there. Otherwise structurally the tune is good and the production sounds very clean
so yeah i made another dubsteptune and once again im interested in what you guys think
http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/rostik-one-day-ohyra
http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/rostik-one-day-ohyra
- Feutus Lapdance
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