New dubstep by Ohyra on soundcloud.

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New dubstep by Ohyra on soundcloud.

Postby Draegg » Thu Oct 06, 2011 11:35 am

So yeah i made a new track and i would love some feedback! If you dont feel like giving tips, just listen and tell me if it sucked, or tell me how great you thought it was! :P

The track is called gungrave.


http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/ohyra-gungrave

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Postby Feutus Lapdance » Thu Oct 06, 2011 5:27 pm

Its a good Dubstep Track....but it mis the Rawnes of Reso, Barnoise and Roksonix......maby it needs some vocals and a difrent machinegun sound (this one sounds a bit C&C )Like a AK47 or a M60.

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Postby PEPCORE » Fri Oct 07, 2011 8:14 am

I dunno man, i really don't like dubstep that much so i don't know what to say. :) The bass is okay i guess. But what feutus says really miss that hard rawness sound.

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Postby SweetPeaPod » Fri Oct 07, 2011 2:04 pm

i thought it was a good track.. i just don't like the wobbles.... not saying you did it bad, i just like the dub that doesn't have that. .. sorry, i know you like that sound. You just hear it all over the place.. You should try to replicate that sound movement with different sources... like the sound of water... or trains... or take a fucking piece of aluminum or sheet metal, and record yourself shaking that shit!!!! play it like an instrument :)
Bring some new form to this style !!!! Hype it up without going to a "go-to" sound :)

you're prob all, "well, fuck you dude".... but i mean well... again, i thought you did a good job

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Postby Draegg » Sat Oct 08, 2011 12:44 pm

@ fetus & pep: Yeah i agree, it could have been a bit rawer but im kinda bad at it. When i try to make my shit more raw, it usually ends up clipping really fucking horrible :P

@ sweetpeapod: Hahha check out some of my other tracks then, like romero project, more deep and stuff! Actually one of the wobbles is a sample of a glass hitting floor!

Hahha no im not all "well fuck you dude"! I be loving all of your feedback! Thanks alot to everyone! *gay unicorns dancing in the rainbows and everyone is happy"

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Postby Feutus Lapdance » Sat Oct 08, 2011 2:30 pm

No....I dont mean It should be more dirty. But we are Breakcore....And if Reso and Barnoise have somthing in comon Its the fact that, Just like in Breakcore, there is 4 things going on at the same time, 4 things in harmony. So.....make it les minmal and make it more complex.....make it more.....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y29wtWiMjHs

Note the vocals, note the Hardcore and note how 4 things work togeter

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaDHJMmJZRc

The amen, the 8bit, Drums, vocals, Note how al those things work togeter......

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=30i3dq4j ... re=related

Ok dont wory. Joure sound is realy good.....its a good track......But, jou have the abilety to be more....to surpas the normal.....to bring sound to overdrive. Not to be boring like this dude.....


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=37yT3BrA ... re=related

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Postby djtheblade » Sun Oct 09, 2011 8:01 am

Clipping is great, I clip all the time :)
Just feed your wobble through FL Blood overdrive. And stick some metallic clangs in there. Otherwise structurally the tune is good and the production sounds very clean :D

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Postby SweetPeaPod » Sun Oct 09, 2011 1:38 pm

cool. i will check it... glass huh? nice :)

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Postby Draegg » Wed Oct 12, 2011 1:35 pm

so yeah i made another dubsteptune and once again im interested in what you guys think

http://soundcloud.com/ohyra/rostik-one-day-ohyra

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Postby Feutus Lapdance » Wed Oct 12, 2011 3:24 pm

AWSOME.....300% improvment....this is wat I was talking about...

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Postby Draegg » Thu Oct 13, 2011 7:19 am

Haha! Thanks man and thanks for the comments!

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Postby iamgod2011 » Tue Oct 18, 2011 10:53 am

sweet

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